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war between spiderwebs n flies by ~719:icon719:



falling under, let me fall, rescue, surrender,
i can't believe your marveled expression,
when i tell you that you've gone too far,
pass it on, follow some more, that's not what i meant,
fuck you for not listening with such intent,
you've no remorse, no relief, take it back, i can't believe your primitive attack,
calm it down, climb the walls,
cover your ears, fill the stalls,
moisture erupting beneath cells so superficial,
tears falling, there's no competition,
expected nothing other than a web of lies,
the war between spiderwebs and flies...
©2002-2009 ~719
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about this fucker who cheated on me. numerous times.

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:iconmascaraboy:
wonderful, beautiful use of your rage a real image in my head of pressing fingernails into hands ect.
my favourite bits were the half rhyme in the first line and the penultimate 2 lines, i love the idea of this war you've created.
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mascaraboy

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